Amelia K.
-bright and pleasant sound; make sure vowels are consistently focused and brilliant
-some slight intonation issues at the beginning; probably just nerves
-great work on higher range; would love more breath support
Olivia C.
-breathy tone (are the vocal folds coming together all the way?)
-could be sick or very nervous, but there is definitely more sound in that singer
Madison W.
-find a focal point for the performance
-would love some more musicality and intentional phrases (syllabic stress)
-great work with a difficult song; more breath support would definitely help increase the amount of sound
Sierra W.
-avoid rocking back and forth (will help get more support in sound)
-very clear transition between passaggios at the moment, would love more consistent breath support throughout the range
-avoid modifying the vowel so much on higher notes (it's getting swallowed at the moment)
-would love some more character and expression in the lyrics
Ethan W.
-would love the lower notes to be more in his "speaky voice"
-lots excess air in the tone; would be able to get through more phrases if it was used more efficiently
-love the commitment to the character; would channel that energy into one focal point
-would love for the sound to go "up" then "out" instead of just out
Branden W.
-lots of extra air in the tone; could be a stylistic choice or just nerves
-love to focus the tone in the vowels (they are getting trapped in the throat)
-more diction would also help the focus and help the tone cut across the piano
-would love more musical levels throughout the song
Christina A.
-beautiful dark tone, but is getting a little trapped in the throat
-would love more focus and brilliance in the vowels
-the fast and uneven vibrato makes me think that the breath support is not as efficient as it could be (the tone feels like a "choir soprano's tone" to me)
-I think this singer has way more sound in her
Madison B.
-the breath support is pretty efficient (great vibrato and the passaggio transition is relatively clean)
-more focus in the vowel would probably help
-would love some more musical levels (tell the story)
-needs more focus on the lower notes
Alyssa B.
-would love the support and focus of the lower range to continue into the passaggio
-higher notes are very dark and stuck in the throat
-would love more brilliance in the vowels throughout the range
Kat H.
-keep the focus from the first few notes throughout the range
-vibrato seems fast and a little "shake-y," maybe from improper breath support or nerves (it's so close to being really good)
-vowels are pretty focused overall, but could be more consistently focused
-very floaty and beautiful tone, don't be afraid to color it with the vibrato
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